o_o man that's like a DREAm in the modern world you know that right xD Who stays faithful any more? But the concept is nice and written well. Too bad it's not realistic

This poem was quite sad and bittersweet-ish in a way.

The only problem I can find is spelling. "Lureing" should be luring and instead of "vein" I think it should be "vain"

But other than that, I like the rhyming... I can't rhyme very well, so I admire anyone who can. Good job :)