Loved the poem, you go about writing it in a complex rhythm that was just delightful. the wording was wonderful as well, and the feeling you gave to the writing seemed to be evident. excellent poem, and I plan to anxiously read more of your writing.

Benoen

awesome poem, some of the words are a little hard to catch hold of, but I need a bigger vocabulary anyway. You should really try less complicated wording, thouhg. Not that anyone can judge poetry, poetry is as the writer sees it, personal to them, so who cares if someone deosn't understand it. but I always thought people think in simple words, simple, almost instinct ideas when they're in lots of pain. But I still love your style.