Hey Jeff, it's Autumn.

You are so god dam lucky, you know that? To have found such a wonderful girl like Heather. You guys are so great together, and I am so proud of With the exception of a few classified times, you handled this situation admirably, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. I just wanted to say congratulations on finding a girl that makes you feel like this...its really a once in a life time thing, and I pray that you don't do anything stupid to let it go. Promise me that you'll keep her close and never let anything happen to her. You guys are way too good together for that. Now that you have what you've always wanted, keep it. It hurts too much when its gone, and I don't want either of you to feel it. You're a great person, Jeff, and I know Heather knows it too, and you deserve her for everything you've gone through. Congratulations, good luck, and happy thoughts.

--Autumn

Aw...why doesn't anybody write poems about *me*? OK, we're done with that now... This is really beautiful. I like how you don't use capital letters. You have a few grammar errors though, so you might want to proofread. Also, I don't think the phrase 'drop dead gorgeous' really fits in with the style of the poem. You don't need to describe it that strongly; a less emphatic word would actually make it more touching. The rest of the poem has a sweet simplicity to it; stick with that. Very lovely overall. ~pointythings

awh. ♥you have no idea how amazing you are.i just got home and i miss you already. (i can't find my words again...)eight more days of school, then we ditch our school attire, slip into our summer skins and dream about santa cruz.

i love you. ♥

The feeling was definately there.. good job.