|Reviews for The look of My World|
| a silenced revolution 2/8/07 . chapter 1
Nice and angsty. I like it.
Is there a typo somewhere in the line "I wish now to never had to see"? It doesn't seem to make sense.
I suggest changing "it'll always stay" to "That it will always stay" to make the rhythm flow better.
Still, good work.
| Universal Empire 7/9/06 . chapter 1
Very emotional piece! I liked this one. Well done!
| bR0k3N 6/17/06 . chapter 1
| kathleen30263 6/4/06 . chapter 1
Good expression of emotions.
| Amalia Jagd 6/4/06 . chapter 1
aw sad ending. if u ever edit this and make it longer, let me know! :)