Nice and angsty. I like it.

Is there a typo somewhere in the line "I wish now to never had to see"? It doesn't seem to make sense.

I suggest changing "it'll always stay" to "That it will always stay" to make the rhythm flow better.

Still, good work.

:Isabella-May:

Very emotional piece! I liked this one. Well done!

same here...

Good expression of emotions.

aw sad ending. if u ever edit this and make it longer, let me know! :)