Nice. I really like the unique point of view, the motive, of this one. It's an interesting thought. The only line I really don't like is "In the light everyone is mean"; 'mean' sounds rather immature. I do realize, though, that you had to use it to rhyme. I like the visual descriptions of "The gentle glow of a candle and snow".

I like this. It shows a lot of emotions with every line

WOW! this is brilliant!

In the darkness everything becomes clearer than daylight. Nicely written!

Well written. I like this. Very true.

I like the idea of this poem and the message you are trying to send but, I don't think the rhyming works quite right for it...it seems forced...but the poem is still good i just think it could use a little work...Keep writing forever and always

Jessica