The poem has a raw, honest but not quite clear headed feeling to me... or more the voice does... I love the way it is written, I love the words you use and the way you put it all together.

Amazing ideas! - Eating lightbulbs like cake - Fantastic simile.

egh can we say heroin? or something similar. you are very good with images - the absence of teeth, the blisters, etc... this is not a pretty poem. then again, this is not a pretty subject.

This is very creative and original. You have an amazing way with words. I love it!