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| Marisa Gittinger 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseOh my GOSH! I did NOT expect that ending! How sad! |
| Ladie Night 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusei really like the detailed introduction, it grabbed my attention. The story in all was very interesting and held my interest during the entire time i was reading it. i liked it a lot. |
| MissMarie9 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseVery good discription (as are most of your stories Miss. Lady Kyra Marie!) I enjoyed the beginning and middle very thoroughly, I thought that the ending happened a bit to quickly and gave the reader very little time to adjust from the middle to the end but other than that it was really quite well written. While reading "Sliver of Silence" I felt if I was watching a quick but powerful little 30 minute T.V program. The Visual representation was absolutly flawless, the detail that you discribed and included was really some of the best that you have done (that i have read) Stick to what you are doing girl, it's working ;) ?!-*(~ Colby Pendergaft ~)*-?! |
| Beautifula 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseGosh, that's a really sad piece but written really well. |