Sad in a way but an awesome write! Keep'em coming.

aw... i dunno.. makes me sad... it is sad, how we believed so much wen we were young yet now we laugh at them coz the world is nothing like that...

it starts with the few small things, then it gets to be the whole thing. im not sure what you mean by the poem, but thats what i got from it.

Hm...I loved this. I liked the beginning more than the end, though. Well, actually the middle was my fav. "Triumph./ That core we all have/ For me is empty." Nicely written.

Great job, well done. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^