TT_TT it's been so long since your last update...

“...besides, senseless babbling is only fun when it's coming out of a bishonen's mouth. :D Have fun reading!
One last note. If at any point you find yourself drooling to the point of dehydration, there is a BAA (Bishonen Addicts Anonymous) class right down the hall, first door to your left. I recommend that you take a class immediately, re-hydrate yourself, take a cold shower (I think you know why), and stop fantasizing about what you would do to any of the bishonens in this story if they should so happen to randomly pop up in your room one day, coincidentally tied down to your mattress and wearing nothing but... um, whatever skimpy article of clothing you dream about, or none if you're just cruel like that.”

I haven’t even started reading your story yet and I’m already in love with you. I…I…our brainwaves are so matched that it makes me want to cry with joy. Anyways, I’m gunna finish this chapter and review some more. Heh. (sorry) But, I have to ask, why would anyone want to stop their bishie addiction? Shoot, I say enjoy the beautiful things in life and drool over the hotties XD
Ah. Green eyes. I’m kinda jaded against green eyes; my parents both have gorgeous light seafoam-green eyes and then I somehow get boring brown eyes, wtf? Ugh. Not to say I don’t like green eyes, I’m just jealous/feel cheated out of a beautiful thing. Anyways, continuing…

Wow, Terlen’s laughing makes me think he might be as crazy as me…especially the homeless person comment, cuz I’ve totally actually had that happened to me, you know, where I’m just acting like my usual more-than-moderately psychotic self only my homeless guy pulled up his newspaper to hide from me and my friend….yeah…but I’m totally synched with this character so far, even if it has only been three or so paragraphs XD


Grr, um, well, usually my reviews are longer, but my battery died and my comp only saved the above. Evil, evil battery.

But I'm so freakin' excited to read the next chapter, you have no idea! Bwahahaha! Run ** run! Mwahahaha! No, but really, I can't wait to see what happens. Heheh, I can just imagin Terlen (dammit, i keep wanted to spell his name Terlan) running to his alley on autopilot, getting there and being yelled at by the homeless guy and laughed at by our mysterious(ly hot!) cloaked stranger...fufufu

hmm, i just noticed that I had three different types of evil laughs in that ppg...oops, heh.



Anywho, just want to let you know that I'm already addicted. :) Please update soon

Much love

Are you sure there is no moose of any kind? Yes, I do believe your right, it is not as good as it could of been, the ending was good though. Wes sounds western, no pun intendted. Terlen reminds me of invader Zim (not sure why it needs thought). Poor Xanathous, he has a complicated name and now is being put on as half time announcer. See, this is what happens to sadist who become speakers. Does your house ever get strangely silent, like right before a swarm of alien casada camels. HAve you ever thiught about making a chaptername out of alliteration? If ever bored alliteration is the route out, so says some. Questions are what make the world go round, or at least that is how we figured it out*nods head*. Ahh it is like azcaban but without the spoons and nazi gas rooms. Hmm, do these people have forign food or maybe a good history, that would be wondrous. Though history hardly matters, but you know what they say about how those who don't learn from history are doomed to repeat it. Dom has something with the word "boy". Cellmate, ha ha.

I'm excited! The adventures of Dom and Terlen begin. Whoo-hoo!!

I don't care what you say, this chapter was good. SO there!

Until next time,Serason.

I didn't realize until after chapter three came out that I didn't review this one yet. Whoops. I'm intriqued to see what will happen next.

I love Terlen. I really do. He's goofy, funny, and trouble is naturally drawn to him. He's the perfect character.

Until next time,Serason

Ps. Sory the the short review but you have a new chapter that I'm dying to read.

I liked it. Wasn't amazing. It was funny though, Wasn't halarious.

So in short, 'salright.

Rahmid

Ok. personally I think this chapter was better then what you said it would be so yeah it was good.

And don't think 'cause i don't show it i'm not being impatient, I'm just not sure if you work well under pressure, so I really didn't want to risk it.

Besides i haven't anytime for anything since i just started school last week and all through the month I've had to go through a whole bunch of places for school supplies and clothe and i just lost ELEVEN POUNDS DAMMIT! this is why i hate shopping (and i'm not lying about the 11 pounds! believe me I have a docters check up like ever so often)

oh and i just need to say something before i forget: I just realized how much Xanthos reminds me of my dad except my dad's a sexist bastard... but his temper, the way he does things (like hurting Arurora) then regrets it and stuff and then keeps repeating the same mistake? yeah that, and the way how he thinks everything should be done his way...

So are you going to update this or just leave us drooling with a bucket for more. So do you like maine. You got the mysterious stranger in here quick(that was cool). So what happenseth next. i still can't reach the question mark, that'll ** of my english teacher. i love jess's name. I just figured out why they have two shift things. Sorry just twingedly insane but are not we all(bumbs on the head don't help get sanity). is there a reason that mystery dude won't take amulet? I loved the whole crying out in the mind thing. ah yes sisterly love. So will this story have it's own currancy? I think i like the mystery dude already. See we don't even know this mystery guy's name, you can't leave us with that, can you? Well, if your still in maine i understand. oh have you seen any moose or is that montana? That reminds me don't look into my pin name it just me solving boredom. Crud that sounds like beauty and beast. Well, any way love the story if you want to update when ever, wink and turban.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter as patiently as possible (meaning not so patient) ^.^

Infinetly better! The first chapter was annoying the 3rd time round. LOL

I DId like this one a whole lot!! Is this hooded man who i think it is?

Rahmid

Fast-paced and humorous first chapter, which introduces the protagonist and his relationship with his family members. In my point of view Terlen has an interesting personality: somehow the way he is overconfident, when he is alone, and shy and afraid, when facing people, is an unordinary yet hilarious solution.

(I'm happy you liked "Your gloves, My heart... Our future?". It's wonderful to know that the four hours I used to translate it in English were not wasted.)

YES, it is happy and fun and you got the humor. Yes is a cool word so is no. It was as wondrous as wondrous can get as far as intros work. Well, so I think. I love thieves and I think I am spelling things right. Jess she has got interesting qualities along with Terlan. It has history; I love history. Ahh noo*bangs head on wall*. The old man was humorous he is also very protective of his cobble stone. I wonder why*goes into studious corner*. Well, bye. Love the story( it is hard not to).

Hey there, thanks for your comment! I'm glad someone is liking my mermaid story :) I haven't actually thought of Hidden Identity as a yaoi story...but it may happen since I cannot resist NOT putting yaoi into the story, heh.

Anyways, this is a review not a chat bubble, lol. That was interesting, and I like how descriptive you are. It'd be cool if you can continue the story because at this point it's very incomplete. Is Terlen going to escape, is the guard going to be after him? You see? :) Good job

Two words for you deary. Bless you. Bless you times a thousand and seven. I haven't read your chapter yet, I got to the line just after the title and passed out. The very concept of a story filled with beautiful Bishonen, so beautiful many Bishonen... made my eyes bleed. I love the first part, the "Round whole, square peg part" I didn't get any farther. I promise to read as soon as I have time.

Ps. All you need to do is give Karma a good smack to the face, or cattle prod it in the... well, you know, that'll teach it to do bad things to you. Or else. It'll have to deal with me, a ** off teenage Elemental, a whiney Lizard-demon, and Corra. (I'm not sure what she can do, I suppose she'll make Karma extremely cold with her wind powers) Hope that this fun filled review perks you up.

Until next time,Serason

I've given you my comment like 2 times on this one so not doing it again. arg

Get to my drugs already! blah

Rahmid