There's a way to switch it not to double spacing.

All you have to do is open it while it is still in the documents and not a story and make sure that when you press "enter" you press "shift" at the same time.

It makes the lines
look like this rather than

this.

Yeah... Sorry. I actually like the way you have this formatted right now. It looks like you did that on purpose.

Oh I simply love this one!! THe first stanza is so cool, especially the italicized "hear you". It got a little clunky and confusing in the middle, but smoothed out beautifully in the end, and I love the final lines.

Nice poem - the creative formatting was a really nice touch. By the way, if you press Shift + enter while you're typing it you can get rid of the dbl spacing.

Yay! You posted more stuff...lol and I had to review twice becuase you had nothing else up, silly. ;)

Once again, great job. The formatting is something I never really thought to try (save for italics to emphasise every so often) and it has a wonderful effect. Reading this poem without them would not be the same. It creates such emotion. It's giving a tone of voice to your poem, whereas most poems are just flat words that you have to give life to on your own as you're reading it. Very unique, and very good.

I can't wait to read more of your work.

~Krys

this poem is very interesting, even if the site wouldn't let you do the proper formatting - the italic and parentheses almost add a schizophrenic effect. very creative, bravo. ~*

Hey im glad to see you have posted once again. thank you for alleviating my boredom ^_^

your poetry style i have to say is one of the most unique and interesting i have ever seen (and no im not just saying that) its like not only are you the speaker, but your the speaker's voices in their head all at the same time. its trippy and awesome-like!

i command thee, write more!

hey, i really like this. it's really well written, but it has a lot of bitterpain in it. but it's still good. it's real nice. i think it's one of those things only you'd trully get, but it was nice to read.

i love this - the format (italics, highlighting etc, not the double spacing which is so annoying i agree!). flows beautifully. i will hereby go and look at ur other poem :D

i hate the double spacing too... i love how you used the bolds, italics, underlines, and parenthesis to make it look/sound/*feel* so much better. great job. -xan