Elegant. I love how you put fell like that. I also adore the title, gorgeous.

meep...ur stuff is so good.

Great concept, and I love the formatting. It makes the poem more...itself, kind of.

this is wonderful and completely heartbreaking. the formatting is particularly good.

this is great, like always. each peice of your work is just genious. 'i left you with rings under your eyes, instead of your fingers.' i like that.