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theaddictedfighter 2009-10-23 . chapter 4
This was definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. I can't believe you only got 9 reviews for this.

Personally, I'm not a big fan of stories consisting of diary entries only. I've had my fair share of it and sometimes I think it gets boring and monotonous, too one-sided and lacking in descriptions. It's more reflective and pensive than anything; you know, talking about something that has happened instead of something that is happening at the moment. However, you really worked around the restraints. Not only did you take this writing technique and turn it your way to make the story unbelievably special and ADORABLE, you managed to embody a giddy sort of romance in just four chapters. It's complete, it makes sense, it wasn't too fast, and it was as perfect as perfect can get. :D A bajillion and one thumbs-up to you! Gosh, this is one of my favourite stories ever. You have a GIFT. :D

Mands
smurf-love 2009-09-21 . chapter 4
aw thats hella swee even if they fond true love while trying to "shag" each other lol
Pop the Bubble 2007-11-09 . chapter 4
aw that was cute
loved the last two notes =]
anon 2006-11-08 . chapter 4
hey i love this story, i read it a while ago, but i just wanted to let you know that it's still a great read!! hope you write another story soon x
Sunshine Knight 2006-06-17 . chapter 4
ok i was going to review last night but i had to get off. This is probably the best, most well written and flowing non-published story i have ever read. I love how you were able to ease will and abbie into love so that its hard to tell when they fell in love. I loved it and it is going on my favorite stories list.

Chrys
Ginne 2006-06-15 . chapter 4
I LOVE IT!

YAY!

AW!

I hope this isn't the end, but if it is, it fits and it is my all time favourite story (although short, still favourite)

-Ginne
sin-sanity 2006-06-12 . chapter 3
I love it! Keep it up, it's great!
My Works 87 2006-06-11 . chapter 2
oh my gosh! This story is hilarious. You are really doing an excellent job with the journal entry story format. I am not a big fan of this format becuase people rarely do a good job with it. But I love yours! So all the more power to you. Haha. I like the differences between a girl/guy's journal, and the random notes/e-mails and im messaging put through it is effective without being annoying, overdone or distracting from the main storyline. Great job. The only thing I could ask for is a little more background on the characters/supporting characters. I've been thrown into these people's lives, and I feel like I'm reading something too personal because I don't know much about them. Does that make sense? I know it's hard to do with a journal format because characters would be talking about this but... eh? Haha. Update soon.
blondiexoxo 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
love it i hope u update real soon!
Dangereuse-Penguin 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
I love the story- faintly reminicent of Meg Cabot's books (a favorite of mine).

I just thought you should know that I've heard that the British don't really say "pants" when referring to "trousers". When they say "pants", they're referring to "underwear".

Again, I adore your work!

-Dangereuse
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