a dichotomy, written down. i like the flow of this. not bad, eleanor-of-the-sun. yes, a new title. eventually you will have as many as the Dream King himself, hm? _

I really like this poem. It may be a cliche, but its so expressive in your feelings and emotions about this person. I can relate many things to people and events of my life and I really like that. Keep up the good writing!