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| Bernita Bean 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseWONDERFUL.I love the "anyone could expect we love each other." The imagery here is beautiful, also, I like how you mention how hard it is to resist 'the devil.' |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI like the lines "devil boy... red was never my favourite color" and of course the ending, "who can resist the devil?" It said a lot about the narrator's views on this boy in just a few sentences, creating two very real characters, and in poetry that is rare. Excellent. |
| who-im-bleeding-for 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abusei like this one a lot. red was never my fav colour, but then i got addicted to it. i go overbored. i eat red, thats how much i love it. and who CAN resist the devil? his sweet 6 |