This stoy is really nice, im sorry people copy them but its good that you dont give up, i hope they mature too, good luck.

GREAT start to the story, intriguing and interesting from the first paragraph, I love Eve's ambition and goals, and I like Julian's cultured style and Eve's cooky mother's sneakiness. I hope more chapters are to come, this seems like it could be a classic favorite for many. Good Luck!

Ah, damn, I really wannted to read this. hehe

I like. Were is the rest?

you should continue it! It's really good and funny.

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Oh, and you should totally write a sequel for him, and including Julian and Eva's adventures as parents!

:) What about Dederick? He needs some loving.

Aloha! El amigo... (and thats wer my spanish talent dies ;)

Loved it all! I loved it even more cos i didn't hav to wait for updates. Hehe. And the fact that I spent all day today pretty much reading it is gana come back and bite me in the but considering I should be studying for my exams in just over 3 weeks. Ah, the sacrifices we make...

Anywho, back to your story. The plot was great, the characters were great. (i know, my words of insight are famous...) The amount of Drederick in there was teasing cos he appeared enough to make you love him but not enough cos your left wanting more. Any yes, i am definately in favour of a sequel and even more in favour of said sequel revolving around a previously mentioned stud. :)

Aww, its so cute that she gets pregnant in the end!! (I really hope no-one reads this review before finishing the story cos, sheesh, talk about a spoiler). Getting married in a private aeroplane... now THATS original.

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you know no matter how happy i do feel for Julian&Eve. Dederick's situation is just absolutely heartbreaking! thanks for the fic.

OMG! loved this. love the love, the drama, the suspense and the humour! aw. i hope you write a sequel for dederick. he really is quite a sweetheart. :D

It's a good story but you put too many words in bold and in italics. You emphasize too many words and it ruins the effect.

"You have cheap balls.” That was really funny. I like this story a lot so far. Sorry for not having reviewed sooner. What I like about this story is that it isn't filled with fluff it has more honest anger I think than most bet stories and I was fully expecting Julian to do a full 180 in his treatment of Eve after his talk with the cab driver but I'm glad that he didn't because it would have been unrealistic. I love how Eve's mom talks. It sounds just like my friends mom used to and even though I know she understood English she would do the translator game just like Cindy. I'm excited to see how Eve acts in Canada I hope she doesn't embarrass him to much becuase he's not a bad guy he just can be kinda jerk-ish sometimes. I wanna download that song that Eve was talking about because I like music with metal and classical intertwined. Apocalyptica is a group that's like that though they don't have a vocalist their music is still great stuff. Anyway on to the next chapter.

wow!! I just want you to know that your story is wonderful. No story has made me cry this easily in a very long time. extremely beautiful story...I havent' even finished it yet but I think you should look into getting this published..

Definately one of the best stories on FictionPress... you should seriously look into getting it published, I believe publishers would be highly impressed :-)