 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-06-05 . chapter 1WOW!! That was amazing! The emotions were powerful and vivid and it was wonderfully written. The descriptions the narrator was feeling were very vivid, and I loved how in certain places there was a bit of rhyme, but not much, so that it didn't make you obligated to read it a certain way yet it made it a slight bit more rhythmic. Great job, keep it up!
Oh, and btw, thank you so much for your review on "Winter Through a Window". I'm glad you enjoyed it! |