i thought seen as u reviewed me id rewiew u ive gotta tell u i just lv all ur poems they really get me thinking i hav 2 admit though this 1 is my favorite

oh my god, i luv it! you have this way of keeping the true information from your reader until it is most wanted. great job!

p.s. what a beautiful title!

i like that small description of the eyes. yet at the ned you hint that the holder of the eyes is somewhat devious! I LOVE IT!

Nice, like marmalde!

This is short but very beautiful. A little gem :)

Great job, well done. Write on!

Anna