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| GeekyChica 2006-07-01 ch 1,   | Horrifying, but very well written and very thought-provoking. Of course, for a poem about Dachau to be anything but horrifying would be inappropriate. Chilling and very well done. |
| Raven's Pen 2006-06-05 ch 1, | i -very- recently visited dachau (within the past few weeks) and i truly feel that you have to visit it to get a real sense of it. im not sure whether you have or not, but the one thing that i felt at the camp was...complete emptiness. it was like the place had no soul, and i think your description "i am...only a number...reduced me to so little..." emphasizes that well. it was truly a chilling place |
| Dragonzz 2006-06-05 ch 1, | whoa. This is a vry well written poem. Great job! I just finished reading the book 1984 by George Orwell, and that's what this poem reminded me of... ~dragonzz~ |
| whatshername665 2006-06-05 ch 1, | Very good. Very true,and very sad. Wonderful job, and well done. |
| Plastic Roses Never Die 2006-06-05 ch 1, | When I went to Germany this January, my dad and I went to Dachau. It made a huge impression on me. |