i like the tone of mystery in this piece. well done

keep writing!

Hey Bus buddy,You insisted I write a review of your poetry.I hate to break it to you but it's really not my style, so I dont really give it the best review ever. You have some good ideas, and I sort of see where you're going with it, but your writing style has not evolved into true prose yet, you really just wrote something in poetry format and called it a poem, it's more of a paragraph that you divided into lines. But hey, you're young, I'm sure your writing will mature in time.

'My light and colors.' that was so nice. Like, everything physical that a person possesses, so simply. I liked that.

thanks for your kind reviews! :o

Simple yet elegant. I love the last two lines!

First of all, thank you very much for all the reviews and putting me on your favorites list.

This poem, for some reason, reminded me of Tori Amos. I don't know if you consider that a compliment, but that's just what I noticed.

I liked the poem, the idea behind it, the atmosphere. Good word use, with an interesting title. I commend you on a job well done!

You are my idol! *applaudes*

Your review made me laugh my head off, such a change from all the others! I don't know if you were joking about the metaphors and depth of my poem because, *shrugs*, but it doesn't matter! I must say that you're very odd, but lol, I like it! ^_^

One thing I must say however, I'm not one to care for structure of poetry as such, it's more the emotion that I want to convey.

Uhh... nice poem, by the way.

Keep blowing people away with your.. ehm.. reviews! ^_^

Good on ya mate!

~Anna~ ^_^

It was odd, yet good, and therefore I liked it. Nicely done.