interesting you should continue it

Heh. Onid is so funny. :) I feel a bit sorry for him (in a loving, respecting way) that although he proved his family wrong, he got tossed out of hell in the end aanyway. Very sad (or is it a good thing to get rejected from Hell?)While I'm on the subject though, Azriel (damn his cool name!) is a horrible person. Love the siren/banshee comment, however. :)

I like it so far. Please continue. (The beginning was a little confusing, but...)

Very nice. Good plot beginning, a minimum amount of spelling/grammar mistakes, an interesting way of switching between veiws, and absolutely wonderful characters. I like Illiande too (love their names.)Can't wait to read more. :)

its very purrty

i did nearly cry

which is kinda sad

but anyway that measn it was very good

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I'm surprised I'm the first one to review. This is a good story. Entrancing, more like it. I gotta say, how you constrcuted your sentences, you spaced the words and the phrases to fit in a certain manner was genius. Snaps for you.