I never get tired of reading your work, dear.
And I must say that this is one that sticks with me. It's so beautifully done and I love it.

I was pointed towards your story to read. It was a good little story that I honestly enjoyed.

I hope you are not offended but I took the liberty of noting a few suggested editorial suggestions. Take them or ignore them I don't mind.

all the hwile(while) he kissed her thoroughly, telling her as best he could how he didn’t care if she didn’t want to talk.

The(they) slapped back down to his side, helplessly

Um, that was so. freakin. cute. I loved it.

Great job!

All right...you have my attention.

This is a good beginning for a story. This might be another good one for me!

Update.

BFQ

*Squee* I loved this story and I'm so glad you finally put it up here. *tackles* Now write more on 'DRAGON EYES'!

Cute... I really liked it. Good job man. (Yes, I know that you're a girl and all but WHO CARES?) The last sentence was cute. And even though I'm not very good at being mature (haha), I sucked it up for the piece. Nice job Ann.