Lovely beginning. It drew me in right away and kept me interested. It makes me wonder what happened 7 years ago for her to gain her powers and it makes me wonder what all this "computer" program was originally designed to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully my questions will be answered!
I couldn't comprehend myself how amazing this story is so far. Nice job, I love it with a passion now! I LOVE IT! Update please! UPDATE! AH! I should have read this sooner...
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