i like how your stating the things that happens when death comes along. and that it's pretty dark as well; i'm a big fan of dark poetry. anyways, another good poem.

-Lucifer Leviathan

very dark and sad :/

that is so scary like. depressing. but at one point of time i felt like that

The ending kind of just lingers there, I think that's a good thing. I liked this, very dark.

O.o... creepy...kinda scary actually... nicely written tho

Keep going!