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| xWhit3StaRx 2006-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseAw...that's adorable!! I love it to pieces =) |
| a lonely september 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseaw. that's so sweet. love is so incredible (sometimes) & i'm happy for you. : ) |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseAww... This is sad and sweet. I love it! Excellant job! *::~Cat~::* |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI think the format of this really makes the poem, b/c the words are pretty straightforward, and the format just makes it better. And your author's note? Too freaking cute. Keep writing! :) |
| elvenstorm 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was a beautiful poem but your authors note on the end just made me smile so much. This is something pretty much every one can relate to but just love your unique spin on it! The whole idea of edging closer is so true and perfect. Great poem x |
| Grey Eyed Oblivion 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's such a sweet little peice ^^ Love your poems! |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseoh, it so sweet! Its short but says everything and leaves you wondering. The formatting really adds to the tension and emotion in the poem, so does the author's note. Really well written. Flows beautifully. |
| Giraffe 63 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseAww, I really like this, think it's so sweet. It kind of put me into the tension of the situation, and I like the word choice. Wonderful work. :) |
| mormonboy 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Did she actually kiss you? Or is it just a hope that she would but didn't? |
| method acting 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseQuaint. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAww that's so sweet - cute and cuddly. |
| insomnia in dreamland 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abusegoregous. the author's note added something a little extra to it too. just gorgous. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseaw so sweet. nice work. |