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Pie-Junkie 2006-08-30 . chapter 17
w00t. Very nice. Really thought Geb would truly fuck 'im over in the end tho. So ya surprised me.
Esquirella 2006-08-30 . chapter 17
Very cool story!
Prisoner-11 2006-08-27 . chapter 17
Oh...well...cool! I didn't expect it to end so bluntly. It was still good though!
Casey Drake 2006-08-23 . chapter 17
...aww... I like the ending, especially the new Gabriel...

heh. Well, it was kind of funny to see Satan defeated by the despair of the Archangels.

Pretty good.

Over and out,

:) CD
Cedric Kale 2006-08-23 . chapter 17
Beign the kind person u ar yah right Night love the ending this is so good sad Gab died oh well he kinda deserved it seeya

write a new story k.Daisuki
Cedric Kale 2006-08-13 . chapter 16
Ooh nice fight scene seriously, don't u dare kill Sam off, he's so adorable
Kary 2006-08-07 . chapter 16
Ok this story is so freggin good!! I hope you keep writting, i just can't seem to get enough of it. I think you are doing a very good job with it and the suspence is what calls you to it.Keep it up!PSYou need to discribe things a little more so others can see them as you do.
Prisoner-11 2006-08-06 . chapter 16
Nah, you're probably not going to kill Sam...wait you already did...twice...I think Gabriel will snap out of it and save him...but I could be wrong...
Pie-Junkie 2006-08-05 . chapter 16
Uh, wow. I loved the characters and the story. Power to Night-ness!
Casey Drake 2006-08-03 . chapter 16
Kill him off and I will dance upon you, after I've jumped on Gabriel and Satan.

:) CD
Sakru angelqueen 2006-08-03 . chapter 16
Hey I started to read this and like where it's going. There were a few mistakes here and there. Still great story!
Prisoner-11 2006-07-27 . chapter 15
Sure glad I decided to look into this story! It's great!
ann 2006-07-20 . chapter 15
Wow. This is a well thought out and extremlly well written story. I just love it, and i don't read much of this kind. And your so good at updating, wish i had that kinda drive. Keep up the good work and let's hope that Night can save Sam, again...
Casey Drake 2006-07-20 . chapter 15
GYAH! why didn't I see this coming! Gabe... you're mean.

:) CD
Cedric Kale 2006-07-19 . chapter 15
no i hate Gab i hate he is such a dick, Sam no where art thou gone, *starts crying*
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