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les petits bateaux
2006-06-08
ch 1,
i like the power in this a lot. your haiku speaks well.

-trinity
Basara
2006-06-08
ch 1,
Heroes! ( with a salute even if I don't know how to do a proper one...O.O )

nice =)
sylvia's syndrome
2006-06-06
ch 1,
Well, traditional haikus follow a format of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. You’ve written 5, 8, 5 but I like it all the same. I particularly like your use of parallelism. Keep up the good work!
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