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| les petits bateaux 2006-06-08 ch 1, | i like the power in this a lot. your haiku speaks well. -trinity |
| Basara 2006-06-08 ch 1, | Heroes! ( with a salute even if I don't know how to do a proper one...O.O ) nice =) |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-06-06 ch 1, | Well, traditional haikus follow a format of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. You’ve written 5, 8, 5 but I like it all the same. I particularly like your use of parallelism. Keep up the good work! |