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Reviews For: Lucifer

Slightly Obsessive 2008-08-19 ch 1,	abuseInteresting take on Lucifer's perspective, especially about his defeat. Good use of dialogue!
Patricia 2006-06-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey sorry it took so long to reveiw. It was interesting a bit confusing with the gaps but I'm going to read the Last Battle for Haven now and Serafine of course. :)
James Eyeklll 2006-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseOoh this one almost slipped past me! I'm sure neither one of us would want that XDD Nice little... errm, I'll call it a character encapsulation, for lack of a better term; effectively manages to show all things Lucifer with only 10 words, very nice ^^ That evil bastard! Using humans in his war like that!! How could he?? Who would've thought Satan could be so cruel to the little guys? I... I'm shocked! ;__; Yeah somehow I seem to have this vested interest in what happens to the humans and it made me all partial against Lucy ...though I haven't the faintest idea why that might be XD So then of course, I'm sure it's an indication of your writing that my sympathies were almost entirely swayed back in his favour by the end when he was all betrayed and alone and stuff ^^ Almost XD Though I'm sure I'm not the first person to feel sorry for a loser when he's down XDD
Sony_Mouse 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery Dark (just the way I like it). ANd of course the only good ending is a bad ending (for the characters that is). I give it two thumbs up and can't wait to read more. And I'm not just saying this because the author threatened to turn my dog into a pie and eat it if I didn't review... sick author that she is... Still great. Can clearly see the development as an author. Sony the Mouse
Ravi 2006-06-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou know, i'm not exactly sure what to say here. I mean, it's good. Really. good. I can't see anything that's bad. My only complaint is that each section seems to short, like it's only telling most of that sixth of the story.

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