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| Slightly Obsessive 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting take on Lucifer's perspective, especially about his defeat. Good use of dialogue! |
| Patricia 2006-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey sorry it took so long to reveiw. It was interesting a bit confusing with the gaps but I'm going to read the Last Battle for Haven now and Serafine of course. :) |
| James Eyeklll 2006-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh this one almost slipped past me! I'm sure neither one of us would want *that* XDD Nice little... errm, I'll call it a character encapsulation, for lack of a better term; effectively manages to show all things Lucifer with only 10 words, very nice ^^ That evil *bastard*! Using humans in his war like that!! How could he?? Who would've thought *Satan* could be so cruel to the little guys? I... I'm shocked! ;__; Yeah somehow I seem to have this *vested interest* in what happens to the humans and it made me all partial against Lucy ...though I haven't the faintest idea why that might be XD So then of course, I'm sure it's an indication of your writing that my sympathies were almost *entirely* swayed back in his favour by the end when he was all betrayed and alone and stuff ^^ Almost XD Though I'm sure I'm not the first person to feel sorry for a loser when he's down XDD |
| Sony_Mouse 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Dark (just the way I like it). ANd of course the only good ending is a bad ending (for the characters that is). I give it two thumbs up and can't wait to read more. And I'm not just saying this because the author threatened to turn my dog into a pie and eat it if I didn't review... sick author that she is... Still great. Can clearly see the development as an author. Sony the Mouse |
| Ravi 2006-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, i'm not exactly sure what to say here. I mean, it's good. Really. good. I can't see anything that's bad. My only complaint is that each section seems to short, like it's only telling most of that sixth of the story. |