Um, a "little ditty"? I think that it is a beautiful piece of work. I can sympathise with Lucifer--Samael's betrayal is an unexpected blow.

wow...i've never seen lucifer characterized like that. i've only seen him as being a senslessly evil one dimensional bad guy with completely transparent motives and feelings. reading this was a welcome relief from that. good job!

Interesting take on Lucifer's perspective, especially about his defeat. Good use of dialogue!

Hey sorry it took so long to reveiw. It was interesting a bit confusing with the gaps but I'm going to read the Last Battle for Haven now and Serafine of course. :)

Ooh this one almost slipped past me! I'm sure neither one of us would want *that* XDD Nice little... errm, I'll call it a character encapsulation, for lack of a better term; effectively manages to show all things Lucifer with only 10 words, very nice ^^

That evil *bastard*! Using humans in his war like that!! How could he?? Who would've thought *Satan* could be so cruel to the little guys? I... I'm shocked! ;__; Yeah somehow I seem to have this *vested interest* in what happens to the humans and it made me all partial against Lucy ...though I haven't the faintest idea why that might be XD

So then of course, I'm sure it's an indication of your writing that my sympathies were almost *entirely* swayed back in his favour by the end when he was all betrayed and alone and stuff ^^ Almost XD Though I'm sure I'm not the first person to feel sorry for a loser when he's down XDD

Very Dark (just the way I like it). ANd of course the only good ending is a bad ending (for the characters that is). I give it two thumbs up and can't wait to read more. And I'm not just saying this because the author threatened to turn my dog into a pie and eat it if I didn't review... sick author that she is... Still great. Can clearly see the development as an author.

Sony the Mouse

You know, i'm not exactly sure what to say here. I mean, it's good. Really. good. I can't see anything that's bad. My only complaint is that each section seems to short, like it's only telling most of that sixth of the story.