i amleft in the middle with his high-tide poetry.his words are saltysweet and catch on my fingertipslike flies on sticky paper. i browse, shamelessly.but my heart is ticking for him.

those lines were just beautiful. You've got a very original, almost heartbreaking style with how sharply and honestly the lines hit you. amazing.

wow. i know i have already reviewed this, but...

i love it so. the concept. i think it is the most beautiful concept you have ever touched upon. gorgeous & universal but so PERSONAL & quiet & desperate & cyclical &... everything about it is wondrous. i can but marvel at everything you write. everything.

Absolutely brillant - WHAT TO SAY TO YOUR POETIC GENIUS? "they laugh. “you can’t escape like this.”" beautiful

i have no idea what to say to this. it's just really good. i dont know. it's different than the poetry i usually read, but it's awesome. really. 'here, love is obsolescence' i like that.. this is so interesting.

(&thankyou. even though i dont agree... ; ) you are incredible.)

“maybe i’ll find common sense in the mirror todayand mama i swear it’s a storm that never abatesit just retreats quietly to get a better vantage pointhoping & praying it’s next attack will take me”

you are a legend. an absolute LEGEND. :D

You can't make love come, just build fortresses of words to keep your heart alive a little longer. I really like the part about common sense: (hoping and praying its next attack will take me). You really capture the strain of getting up every day and acting normal.