this is really well written. 'is it the twist of a tongue?' nice way to describe it. . . (& in reply to what you said... it's not redundant, it's just recently i've been writing ** stuff & i don't think it's insulting. it's my junk, and i'll title it what seems fitting.)

This is a thought-provoking piece. Good job! Write on!

~Anna~

I like this. It actually makes you think. Nicely done.