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| Daydream Nation 2008-03-29 ch 2,  | abuseThat's terrible. And terribly creative. I love it. |
| The Talented Mr. Evan 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseUh, hey. I read this story a long time ago but didn't review then felt guilty and came back. I truly like this story. At first it sounded kind of emo-ish but just as I was about to stop reading , it got interesting when he mentioned the needles inside of him. I like this Tobias guy. He starts out all shy and miserable and ends up killing his stepfather. Great progression. By the way, I have a character named Tobias too. Mine's a bastard though. I really wished it doesn't end here, that would be too stupid. You could go a long way with this. I'd like to see where this goes. |
| call me ish 2006-06-07 ch 2, | abusePLEASE! Tell me that is not the end!That was so friggin cool plu-lease write more!? |