You are a great writer. I like it. Though it does kinda freak me out a little. you wouldnt cut my eyes out would you.? hmm.

You've become a much better writer over time, mi amante. I suppose this isn't what some people like but I find it exhilirating in a murderous sense. Keep Writing!

Beautiful just like the last one Soulist. *applauds*

yay! i get your first signed review!

What really stood out for me was that line "sometimes, monsters parade as heroes". I thought it was really profound and above all definitly true. The bold senteces almost made it feel like a different person was speaking completly, and i thought it added a greater depth to the piece.

Overall, great stuff! Keep writing ^__^

Morbid, yet eloquent and intruiging. However, readers can do without the: "Sorry, I jumped a bit ahead... Let me tell you what happened, please?" That makes it seem childish. I can gather what happened without that.

This is a great story. I love it. And on gaia you said your only 17. I loved this story and I wish you could continue writing stories. If you make any new stories or continue this one please let me know by emailing me on gaia. My name is [.k4k4m0ch1.] The ending of the story is a bit incomplete though. It seems like it isn't finish. Sorry for my criticism.

Yeah for Duo! You already know what I think but I'll let others. It's pretty scary, but if no one wrote this kind of stuff where would the world be? I love it!

Very good. Detailing, and it sucked me in. 10/10.

BRAVO!! As always, my friend, your literary skills took my breath away. VERY VERY good!

YAY DONNY! this is probay the recent fav.. even tho i read it previous i had ta read it again..its just..wo...its amazing! ya know its like an observation at first but ya dont know where its gonna lead to n at the end its like "huh...awesome..but why" keeps ya thinkin...its like asking what came first the chicken or the egg..YAY THINKING!

This is very well written and very intriguing.

This is actually very good Duo *Nods*

She is stuipd. It was very good.Very detailed.

sux **