Reviews for If this is the worst

Reviews For: If this is the worst

fatbird33 2008-08-13 ch 1,	abusei liked the style of this one, and how you put if this is the worst...after each part. and i liked the overall theme. nice job:) ~the fatbird
G.T.H. 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat's up, apostrophe B? Did you even READ the poem? Or do you just have something personal against rhyming? If you want inner meeting, irony, metaphor, and figurative language, check out Tuesday Morning. I might be wrong here, but I think the poem was about a divorce. That's the cool thing: it can mean something different to anyone who reads it. If you see stereotypes and neatly broken hearts, it's only because that's what you're looking for. Okay, sorry about clogging your system, Bitter Irony! I enjoyed this poem a lot, because I tried to find different meanings in it. It's not nearly as good as Tuesday Morning, but I guess it's older. Anyways, it's catchy.
beatrice is hot 2006-12-13 ch 1,	abuseThis is the worst I get, I think you'll make it. HAH. You did a good job--for this kind of poem. You found a lot of words that rhymed. That was nice. The words rhymed very nicely. And you brought off the repetition without a hitch. If your structural goal for this poem was to repeat the beginning of every line and to rhyme words, then congratulations! You're stupendous. And you got your meaning across, too, I guess. Stereotypical love and neatly broken hearts. The pain of getting over someone who meant the world. It hurts a lot to love, doesn't it? This was a flawless example of the kind of poem I assume you were trying to write. Completely smooth. No inner meaning or irony, no metaphor or other figurative language. No stunning diction. Plain. Shallow. Try to shock me next time, why don't you?
Underground Constellation 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abuseI don't read or write poetry often, so maybe that's why I've never seen a poem like this. Anyway, I liked it. The format was interesting, and the poem had a nice flow to it. - Dice Darwin
Kaldaka 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseGood. It really touched me.
Fiore Chnudth 2006-07-02 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. I think much can be praised in it, but what I think to be the best, is the format of it. The format makes the flow very nice and you read it very easily.
Maggot Blood 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseAmazing, just amazing, that's really the only word I can think of to describe your poem. Keep up the good work.
Driderqueen 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseI like this, it's angsty and has excellent rhyme and repition! i think i spelled that right...lol

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