salut, premierement je suis désolé pour ma terrible francias.
mais je suis trés enjoyant ta histoiré c'était interssansent et origional. je suis edtoudé francais á mon college et je trouve que la etait un bon changement de texte.

extremement super! ^.^

Thank you very much Nurgette.
I truly try to make things come to life so your comment is a pleasure. And I'm glad to hear French is still learned !

This piece has a really great feel to it. I love your description and the way that it seems so alive. I am only learning French, so I had to use an Internet translation thing, but it is amazing! C'est super!