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| Noihseret 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusewow. this was beautifully written! I loved how you used "you" instead of a name. that was really creative ^^ you have a such a talent for writing. keep up the great work!! |
| fantasyEsalno 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, not bad! And for someone who doesn't speak English as a 'mother tongue', the grammar and spelling isn't bad at all. There are a few mistakes, but they're general mistakes that a lot of people make even when they speak English as their first language. This story really made me smile. :D I'm putting it up on my Favorite Stories list. Keep writing! |