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Reviews For: Your gloves, my heart: Our future?

Noihseret
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abusewow. this was beautifully written! I loved how you used "you" instead of a name. that was really creative ^^ you have a such a talent for writing.

keep up the great work!!
fantasyEsalno
2006-06-10
ch 1,
abuseOh, not bad! And for someone who doesn't speak English as a 'mother tongue', the grammar and spelling isn't bad at all. There are a few mistakes, but they're general mistakes that a lot of people make even when they speak English as their first language.

This story really made me smile. :D I'm putting it up on my Favorite Stories list.

Keep writing!
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