i like the style.

man, I liked this one too. God, your good at this stuff.

another great poe lv this 1 and gets me asking the question why 2

You've definately have talent! Nicely done!

Awesomeness. And thanks for your review for my poem. We almost have the same writing style.

Notice I said almost. It's impossible for two people to have the same thoughts and feelings.

Again, this is awesome. Made me think.

Donum

Very nice. I like the repeated question. The answer to 'why?' is what you want it to be. You can shape it or melt it into anything you choose.

Shadowhound

Superb D! Absolutely brilliant!