Wonderful word choice. The rhyming and flow seemed to come so easily. Nicely written!

Interesting poem. i like the ryhmes. Sorry, I can't think of more accurate things to say about how to elaborate on those feelings right now.

Shadowhound

Very nice! I like the pithiness of the lines and of the poem as a whole. The rhyming was well done – it didn’t sound contrived, it helped the poem and ideas flow, and it made the poem sound catchy. Keep writing!