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| Lady E 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseVery powerful and emotional. The whole page just leaks of painful honesty. Beautifully crafted, really. I wonder if you actually sent/gave this to the person you addressed. Or if you just needed to vent. |
| Julie 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely. Thanks for putting some of my feelings down in this uh... fiction press piece of writing. |
| zephyrlight 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abusefor what it's worth, I think that this piece is really good..very emotive, and very eloquent.. |
| minute-glass 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei don't know if this is based on true events or not, but if it is, then i have to say that you write very well when you're emotional. this is a very good piece... maybe it's because i can relate to it. i'm also bad with my words and though i try, i don't think i do a very good job at comforting others |
| Yachtzee 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's so sweet. |
| Studio Finale Sutando 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseIt's very raw...it is full of emotion...honesty, though I don't know if it is or is not...you have much talent... -mychasi |