Very powerful and emotional. The whole page just leaks of painful honesty. Beautifully crafted, really. I wonder if you actually sent/gave this to the person you addressed. Or if you just needed to vent.

Lovely. Thanks for putting some of my feelings down in this uh... fiction press piece of writing.

for what it's worth, I think that this piece is really good..very emotive, and very eloquent..

i don't know if this is based on true events or not, but if it is, then i have to say that you write very well when you're emotional. this is a very good piece... maybe it's because i can relate to it. i'm also bad with my words and though i try, i don't think i do a very good job at comforting others

That's so sweet.

It's very raw...it is full of emotion...honesty, though I don't know if it is or is not...you have much talent...

-mychasi