|Reviews for Each Step|
| Ryan Schiff 6/28/06 . chapter 1
This is the trick to poetry. Don't tell us how you feel. Show us what feelings look like. You say "Its getting harder and harder to follow the rules."
I say:The entropyIn side of meGrows with every strideRiding waves of chaosPulled out by pandamoniums tideEvery moment, harder to get off the ride
| Pandakun84 6/25/06 . chapter 1
Cool. Nice job on this.
| Tikklz 6/12/06 . chapter 1
I agree that this is very "simple and effective". It just says what it means to, without trying too hard. Nice.
| Princess-anna57 6/7/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. Well written. Keep it up.
| elvenstorm 6/7/06 . chapter 1
This is so simple yet effective. Don't know what else to say, this was brilliant. Well done x
| whatshername665 6/7/06 . chapter 1
Hmm sounds like you are trying to stretch your wings and possibly find your self? Great peom!