This is the trick to poetry. Don't tell us how you feel. Show us what feelings look like. You say "Its getting harder and harder to follow the rules."

I say:The entropyIn side of meGrows with every strideRiding waves of chaosPulled out by pandamoniums tideEvery moment, harder to get off the ride

Cool. Nice job on this.

I agree that this is very "simple and effective". It just says what it means to, without trying too hard. Nice.

Interesting. Well written. Keep it up.

Anna

This is so simple yet effective. Don't know what else to say, this was brilliant. Well done x

Hmm sounds like you are trying to stretch your wings and possibly find your self? Great peom!