this poem is going in my favorites. i love the use of repition and oddly i can relate to this poem.your work speaks to me. it was fantastic you're a brilliant writter.

Wow. This piece was very well written. I think the repetition of "She lies" was very effective. Excellent work on this.You're a pretty fantastic writer.

~*~AbunaiChikaraPs. Thank you so much for the review. It was very much appreciated.