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| writing.life.2.4 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abusehaha i luv the last line. and i luv cynics... great oneshot |
| RoseLife 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseso adorable! great work ^^ |
| floopfloop 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuse"At least I found a new way to shut him up and if I had fun in the process well that’s even better." --haha!! i luv that line now > |
| katie valentine 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA. cute! XD |
| Chiclets 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseAmused, am I. I like these sorts of one-shots. Good job! |
| naadz 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed this..it was light hearted and not alot of stories are nowadays...writers want to sound so profound *rolls eyes*...not that thats bad..but ya i liked this story:) |
| Kimberli Kitten 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI really didn't think it was crappy at all. In fact, I very much liked it. |
| luv me like no other 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abusethis was so cute. i loved it! |
| Lily Llynn 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAww this is cute. :D Yayz! :) |
| LL Anonymous 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I like Zach, you know in a friendly way. But I LOVE Wentworth Miller. He's so hot! Hmm, sorry. I liked this, it was adorable! |
| Sienna Mills 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuse"But lime green and pink, what is this, a watermelon?" When I read this I just couldn't stop laughing, really, great work! There could be some editing involved, but mainly just to make the story flow better, everything else, the plot, characters and the rest added up to a fantastic one-shot! |
| aTaintedTouch. 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, I'd like to say that this is a really good One Shot. I loved the creativity of the quiz to get Dakota to 'admit her feelings' without even realising it. By all means, it's a good one. |
| xoxluurve 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseLOL, that was way not crappy =P, haha. It was totally cute. It was fluffy and it showed me that not all girl's play hard to get when they don't like a guy. She actually gave it a chance. =) Keep it up.-xoxluurve |
| elliegator 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseit made me laugh |
| Sephon 2006-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseKawaii!It's very cute. I like it much. |