It's so pretty! I wanna hug it! -clears throat- sorry about that.
Wonderful. You know, I've felt that way before, and I'm sure I'll feel it again. It's very powerful, and sends a good vibe, despite the terror being felt.

i love it!rly good!~Liz

This is cool. I like this. When I was tempted to commit suicide at the age of 15 I couldn't even pray to God. And I knew he was there. I was just so frustrated that he hadn't done anything about the situation that caused my hurt.

This is quite interesting, we are all tempted to do things in life, some greater than others, but i promise you if you keep your eyes on God && always remember that he loves you, nothing can go wrong. keep up the good work..=D

Excellent write. God Bless ya!

Yay for the good ending! God saves!

*applaudes* very good poem. Excellent! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^