Is it a good thing that this vaguely disturbs me? Yes, it is! :)

i like this a lot. very well written, especially for the fact that you wrote this at midnight -- maybe even when you were drowsy. very nice piece. so much so, i'm going to add it to meh favorites. ^-^ you should wake at odd hours again and write more, hehe.

Hey, you wrote it at midnight, and let me tell you, I read it at midnight and it send chills down my spine. *shivers* Something about it is really... punch you in the face... at the same time very haunting. "Your gaze paints a lie

Makes you see gods and heros

That never have to try

You love the bastard,

he looks so free"Is my favorite part. Good job, keep up the good writing, even at midnight.Much Love, RecycledAir