for some reason, this is really striking. it might be because it is so short and well built (only three lines with eight syllables each) or it might be the subject matter. I'm not sure which. Either way, this is a fantastic poem. nice job!

Neat little ditty - :)

intersting contrast... great job

Absolutely love it. No time for more, library doesn't approve of this.

Short but so very, very true. Sometimes what we think will hurt us is actually a way in which to heal. I've lived these words as well. Keep writing.