Very poetic. Nice work on the story pacing.

This is a very interesting piece. I'm not sure what you mean it to be about, or that anyone could get the exact same meaning from it that anyone else did. It's very meaningful to me as I can relate it to something in my life. Others may or may not feel the same way. It's written very well, with an extremely possesive but also equally passive tone to it. It's an amazingly individualistic piece. Great job, keep writing!