I like this.. it makes a great point and the part about love is especially great.. nice piece

i like how you address the reader in such an aggressive way, it almsot makes the reader feel guilty of something... but this guilt is a good thing, because we have all judged people before as you seem to be saying that we are judging you. it's really quite powerful.. adn i think that stems from the simplicity of the phrasing and language and the obvious emotion behind it! good job kimmi!