I think magic marker is a little overlooked - it can create something beautiful. This poem is beautiful in a way that makes my heart ache. Take care.

like a portriat of art describing a moment in life. er, don't know if i explained that right.

"Etched upon my heart like your poetry on paper"

and that line was so wonderful. so... amazing and symbolic, like. great job!

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I ADORE YOUR WRITINGS (I know I said that before but still...)

Keep writing

~PopRox

Remarkably dark and brilliant. One of my favorites.

This is amazing. Everything about it just flows so smoothly, and every word feels full of raw emotion and truly heartfelt. The way the formatting switches from a more traditional, stanza type layout to the paragraph, then back, is really unique, and I like that very much.

ohh... this is lovely. angsty and beautiful. just right. i recently went through- how did you put it? 'a perfect love gone bad'. you voiced your heartbreak much better then i did, deary. i particularly like the rhyming bit at the end.