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BrownEyedBeauty 2007-04-07 ch 19,	abuseNice story, I like it a lot. Great writing = D
cute on the spot 2007-04-04 ch 19,	abusehehehehe...
.ruffled.tulip. 2007-02-18 ch 19,	abuseOMG! THAT IS SO CUTE...AND HILARIOUS LMAO! BUT IT'S REALLY CUTE!
betterthoughtsarehidden 2007-01-28 ch 19,	abusei love it nyahahahah... hey casey and BFQ had a happy ending too... weheheheh
youpin 2007-01-03 ch 19,	abuseSuch an adorable story.I loved that they got married and have a daughter though I wish there were more cute father and daughter bonding and Jack being all protective of his baby girl
helen 2006-12-20 ch 19, anon.	abusemake a sequel! ecept its called 'queen of hearts...' hehehehe! why did ellen fall for him so quickly though? just out a curiosity.
Til Death 2006-11-12 ch 19, anon.	abuseUm... interesting story and plot, but your writing is a bit immature and it seems you don't know much about life yet. The main male character wasn't real enough and the female was a bit too pretty. Maybe you should've made her more... normal. Also, you need to watch out with spelling and grammar because it seemed that after every 2 or 3 sentences there was a grammar mistake. It was an alright story though. So keep writing and developing as an author.
anonymous 2006-09-15 ch 2, anon.	abuselol, very interesting story... great plot... i mean, most of us probably had something like this in our head but never thought of writing it down.. so thank you for taking up this challenge.. Can't wait to read the rest of this... update soon!
Lady Seiryu 2006-08-03 ch 19,	abuseaw! that was a sweet ending, even if jason was a bit of a butt! lol! i can't believe it's over!! i that i wasn't here for the finally! NO!! stupid virus! no! but yes i loved it, it was very funny! and very sweet! and i agree that a sequel for this would not be so good...i don't think it would work at all, so in my opinion your decision on not making it would be the best (and you know i loved yer stories), but i am looking forward to new stuff! (have the check my inbox to see if it's already there..) KEEP WRITING! XD you're great!
mimi 2006-07-29 ch 19, anon.	abusei was kinda dissapointed with the ending... but it was cute
Tzotel 2006-07-26 ch 19, anon.	abuseOk, awesome story! I really did like the ending! It was really good! I think that this story is fine on it's own, unless you make the daughter be egotistical or make her meet an egotistical guy! That would be fun! But I think that part about Jack and Ellen is pretty good where it is! Wonderful story! ~Tzotel
Casey 2006-07-26 ch 19, anon.	abuseWhat a sappy endding. Oh well. I was doing something.. I like reading reviews. They are fun! Anyhow I ended up reading some that people reviewed for this story and... I was called a horny man (I'm female).. I'm sad. People, who don't know me, hate me. I win, yet I'm sad. I think they enjoyed our fight over this. Well.. it was "nice" no... fun while it lasted! Bye.
lidia 2006-07-26 ch 19, anon.	abuseNice story! However, it is rather obvious that you are still very young and have not experienced much in life. Your assumption about rape is off. Also, any man that can sleep with three different women in a few hours cannot change so quickly to a man true to one woman. Jack was not believable. Sorry -- but those are the facts. You have good writing talent. I am sure that your writing will grow as you grow older and experience real life.
whateva123 2006-07-26 ch 19,	abusehope u will still continue the story n update fast
jekodama 2006-07-26 ch 19,	abuseAw! That was so sweet! Hey, maybe you can write another story, and you can add Jason as the bad guy, ne? I really would like to read about him getting beaten up! And what was that about ."Hope you're happy with...Ellen and...YOUR daughter."? was he trying to plant the seed of jelousy inside Jack? Well, poor idiot didn't get his way! Jack and Ellen are perfect for each other!

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