...wow! I am so amazed by this story. You captured the feeling, the setting, without outright explaining it. You could understand everything in the character's eyes you were seeing through.

Those tiny details, little actions, made all the difference. The words were just saturated with emotion, though not too much as to make it, well, you know, sappy.

(The pendant of the four leaf clover really caught my attention, as well as the 'flash of silver.')

I must say, this type of writing style is not the easiest to do nor find, and I wish I could write as well as you. Hehe.

I applaud you~

~Fae