its god

I suddenly realize the brilliance of your title. Hahha! While I think they're totally ** in the head, it all makes sense to them so what the hell. It's their (fictional) life.

Although I can't help but think if they have sex and holy crap, if she gets PREGNANT - the kid is so not gonna be right, even in the biological sense. chromosomes and the zygot and stuff.

Great writing as always! But it does bother me in this chapter that you said Steve wasn't a liar, but then made him lie to Jeph about not having a girlfriend.

Great chapters. Nothing happens in them, and yet they are very enjoyable. It's interesting to watch Faith being somewhat suppressed by her perfect friend, and being loyal to Steven and Claudia's relationship without even being ware about it.

Finally I have read the Flowers in the Attic, indeed there are similarities, and it is not even the subject of incest, but rather the spirit, your story reminds me the beginning of the book.

Greetings from Russia.

No one calls them 'rents. seriously. the only people who call them 'rents, are magazines and idiots

Aw, this was such a sweet chapter. I liked it...ALOT, and can't wait for the next chapter. So plz update soon! :)

Lol the last part was funny. I enjoyed the chapter, and am about 2 read the next chapter, YAY!!

OMG this is the best story ever. I read it like, seven times, and im re-reading it again to put it on my favorites. You're an amazing author.

Oh my, XPixieDustX is so funny, she came here only to say that "Incest is WRONG"? :)

Your such a tease! After... uh, the predicament you left Steve in, you have published two chapters without telling a word about it. Stop it! Puhlease...

I liked it and can't wait to read the next!

How you glorify incest in this story is sick. How can you even you even think of this stuff, let alone write. Incest is WRONG!

I really wish there would be more about claud and steve's relationship. But I did enjoy this chapter. Update really soon!

Woww u r an amazing writer and I just found this story today and just started reading and I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter so plz update soon...,and I am truly sorry for not reviewing the other chapters but I loved them. :)

That was Great!

wow this is a really harsh deep story. you should really write more on this really soon. so please updat.