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Make Me Laugh
Black and White Dreams
2006-06-22 . chapter 1
Nice, I like this.
*::~Cat~::*
Raventonguethemalice
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
This is somewhat funny to me... but not... I like how your short sweet and too the point, but with powerful writting skills
~rttm
Tikklz
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
This one is okay. I was sorta confused about what you're talking about though. I know the narrator is anxious about something, but there aren't any clues as to what. Other than that, I liked the style.
randompoetry
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
the last two lines were the best, it was very...I cant describe it. Great job.
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